Kenlie:
I enjoyed the various clicking sounds, especially the mouth clicking throughout the track. It made the sounds seem more psychological in a way, especially when it went off beat to the rest of the songs.
Something that could be kept in mind when reflecting on your track would be adding another abrupt sound because I think the ringing of the symbol was an exciting touch.
Becky:
I enjoyed the overall mellow feeling to your peace and thought you faded the sounds into each other nicely
An improvement could be thinking about how you can incorporate more dynamics to add to the narrative you have.
Sophia:
There was a very present change in tone between the middle of the track and the end which was a nice transition that kept me involved in your piece.
Something to think about could be adding more abrupt sounds within the piece to stand out from the lengthier clips
Lily:
I liked the busy feel that your track had because of the constant and overlapping sounds that added a sense of action.
Maybe playing around with more effects could enhance your piece, especially to the more repetitive clips.
Simon:
I liked the creaky door sound because it was diverse from the rest and added a repetitive aspect that unified the piece.
I think that you could work a bit more with filling some of the empty gaps, maybe even with white noise if you wanted to enhance that sense of silence.
Hannah:
I liked how all of the sounds overlapped in your track and thought it added a sense of craziness.
Maybe you could adjust the beat or timing on some of your tracks to add moments that differ from the rest(and repeating those if you want that sense of repetition).
Baxter:
I really enjoyed the chatter over your mix of sounds as well as the running out of power like sound that you used near the end that got more prominent as the track went on.
You could look into adding some effects to change the tones of some of the sounds you used.
Colin:
It was super refreshing to hear some different sounds than those from the class file, and with those you conveyed a strong and action packed narrative.
Following up on what I said above you could add some more of the class files to make the audio seem more odd and unexpected.
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